the way sylar killed that first guard and silenty sunk him in the lake was badass.
this is so well written. it might sound crazy, but some of this reminded me of gabriel garcia marquez, especially In Evil Hour, which i love. (it was this paragraph that reminded me: Marridas turned around. He wasn’t an imposing man, his white hair and tanned skin made him look like the type of friendly grandfather you might see sunning himself on a Florida porch, but his eyes were dark and expressionless, and he didn’t flinch at the display of violence as the guard bled out over the floor of the abandoned building.).
and these two are too adorable! love the ending. great job!
Hooooly shit!
the way sylar killed that first guard and silenty sunk him in the lake was badass.
this is so well written. it might sound crazy, but some of this reminded me of gabriel garcia marquez, especially In Evil Hour, which i love. (it was this paragraph that reminded me: Marridas turned around. He wasn’t an imposing man, his white hair and tanned skin made him look like the type of friendly grandfather you might see sunning himself on a Florida porch, but his eyes were dark and expressionless, and he didn’t flinch at the display of violence as the guard bled out over the floor of the abandoned building.).
and these two are too adorable! love the ending.
great job!