ext_41317 ([identity profile] aurilly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] takhallus 2009-03-06 01:39 am (UTC)

This story is ray of sunshine in my day. It's so... carefree! I love all Gabriel's insecurity, and I love all the other random characters. The "give me sex" line from Mischa was fantastic, and god, Naz is giving me so much nostalgia for the 90s, you have no idea. This was a joy from start to finish. I also love the realism of a moment gone; that really does happen. But the lead-up to the kiss that didn't happen was making me lean into the computer, not breathing. So good.

I need that party, NOW. I'm chomping on the bit, here.

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