ext_60793 ([identity profile] levitatethis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] takhallus 2009-03-12 10:08 pm (UTC)

I'm so excited to read a new chapter! I like that you're going against my expectations here. I wasn't expecting Wes to be into Gabriel and though I'm still a bit uncertain about how much Wes really does like Gabriel I like how you allowed Gabriel to feel his own power and strength in the situation. It was interesting to see how that taste of control really gave him this wonderfully assertive edge and yet...when it comes to Mohinder there's this element of uncertainty, still at the back of his mind.

Love everyone being taken aback by the new Gabriel...and the hand job/blow job was hot! Now, how much of what Wes is saying about Mohinder is true? It could be. And it would still work to have Gabriel be something different to Mohinder.

I like how Mohinder can tell there's something different about Gabriel but he can't put his finger on it.

I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!

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