Great chapter! It's so wonderful to have a story like this to read (especially as I'm more and more confused as to what the show is trying to do with the characters). Again you've managed to weave the past into the present while adding accents to enhance things we know. I love the suggestion that there was a connection with Mohinder and Zane in Bozeman but that it was something neither was ready to act on -- too many uncertainties.
And yet now in the present with the truth splayed out in all it's beauty and ugliness that uncertainty becomes a bridge they finally cross together. I think it works really well to go back and forth with the their POVs -- it's like they complete each others story without realizing it (the tossled hair that should have been a kiss...the desire for attention that made the brown eyes comment perfection).
I really like seeing how you're moving them forward by dealing with the past. Not only for what's between them but for what happened with Sylar within The Company's grips when he was first captured.
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Date: 2008-11-20 05:33 pm (UTC)And yet now in the present with the truth splayed out in all it's beauty and ugliness that uncertainty becomes a bridge they finally cross together. I think it works really well to go back and forth with the their POVs -- it's like they complete each others story without realizing it (the tossled hair that should have been a kiss...the desire for attention that made the brown eyes comment perfection).
I really like seeing how you're moving them forward by dealing with the past. Not only for what's between them but for what happened with Sylar within The Company's grips when he was first captured.
I can't wait to see where this goes!