The final chapter! What am I supposed to do now with this story finished?
I really dig how you've wrapped it all up and the real closeness that you've established through all the chapters to lead to this one. I like how much pretense has been set aside and you them trying to be together, as honestly as possible. Gabriel undressing Mohinder (and Mohinder wanting to roll up against him but too tired and having to settle for what he can get) is very hot :-)
And then the wake up blow job? Hello, indeed!
My favourite part though (besides the cuteness of Bennet feeling like a father chaperoning the two of them being all flirty in the back of the car) is that Gabriel only believes that Mohinder's feelings are genuine when Mohinder says he finds Gabriel irritating. If that's not them I don't know what is.
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Date: 2009-01-29 11:03 pm (UTC)I really dig how you've wrapped it all up and the real closeness that you've established through all the chapters to lead to this one. I like how much pretense has been set aside and you them trying to be together, as honestly as possible. Gabriel undressing Mohinder (and Mohinder wanting to roll up against him but too tired and having to settle for what he can get) is very hot :-)
And then the wake up blow job? Hello, indeed!
My favourite part though (besides the cuteness of Bennet feeling like a father chaperoning the two of them being all flirty in the back of the car) is that Gabriel only believes that Mohinder's feelings are genuine when Mohinder says he finds Gabriel irritating. If that's not them I don't know what is.
Great story!