Fic Commentary Meme

[takhallus]

Stolen from moorishflower 

The Fic Commentary Meme

Pick a story of mine, any story you want, and I will go through and tell you what I was thinking when I wrote it.


I mostly posted this because I want the rest of my flist to post theirs so I can hassle them with questions XD


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Comments

[megmatthews20.livejournal.com]

The second chapter of your HS AU! That's the part where Gabriel models, right? Or third chapter...the modeling part! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

cheers! <3333

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

I think it's chapter 3, don't even remember myself!

I was thinking how it would seem intimate but also be slightly weird because Mohinder would be looking at it from both a professional point of view, wanting to make sure his designs looked good, and a personal point of view where he really finds Gabriel attractive. And obviously Gabriel's never been dressed up or touched like that before so it would be strange for him, especially once he realises that there's going to be a photographer there!

My parents are both photographers so I've seen very attractive people get very uncomfortable under the camera lens, and I'm obssessed with the idea of being photogenic. Some gorgeous people are highly unphotogenic and vice versa.

Really glad you like the AU, I was supposed to be posting more last week but this chapter is proving difficult.

[speccygeekgrrl.livejournal.com]

Undercover (http://takhallus.livejournal.com/tag/undercover)! I love that one!

(I already posted my meme... *innocent whistle*)

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

Ooo, I shall go there immediately!

Undercover was from a prompt about being undercover as a couple, which I figured Sylar would love. It was so much fun writing the bits where he was teasing Mohinder about being vanilla and I got to write a playful Sylar which I love. Then I went accidentally angsty because I always do but I think otherwise I might not have been able to end it nicely. A few people left comments to earlier chapters which inspired me to add more details and a few plot twists.

I love hotel rooms, seriously, I could live in a hotel quite happily. In the past when I've felt really stressed I have booked a hotel room and just sat in it watching TV and eating crap and for me that's like a week in the Bahamas!

Undercover started as a silly one shot and I was really pleased when liked it xxx

[pupnamedpeter.livejournal.com]

Sylar and Luke play a game :) (http://takhallus.livejournal.com/28159.html)

I'm not really a big Mylar fan, to be honest.

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

Aw, I am so in love with Luke and Sylar right now. It was a comment fic as you know, but sometimes those very simple prompts are the hardest, especially when you have to only write a couple of paragraphs.

I wrote "you have to say what you want without using the letter E" and then realised you could say loads of things without using the letter E, like "I want to suck your dick" for example. XD

On loads of occasions I have started to write something and backed myself into a corner because I hate drafting lol, but then I realised his name had an E in it, and bang there's the punchline.

[pupnamedpeter.livejournal.com]

I think a lot of people are (at least that I've seen), and I'm one of them.

The funny thing is that his real name could very well have been Lucas and he just went by Luke :D

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

Maybe it was and he still wanted to say 'yours' ;-)

[pupnamedpeter.livejournal.com]

Maybe :) I like the whole "Mine - yours" dialogue. It's sexy.