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takhallus ([personal profile] takhallus) wrote2009-03-21 09:13 pm
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Fic Commentary Meme

Stolen from [livejournal.com profile] moorishflower 

The Fic Commentary Meme

Pick a story of mine, any story you want, and I will go through and tell you what I was thinking when I wrote it.


I mostly posted this because I want the rest of my flist to post theirs so I can hassle them with questions XD


TAGS EVERYONE!!

[identity profile] megmatthews20.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
The second chapter of your HS AU! That's the part where Gabriel models, right? Or third chapter...the modeling part! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

cheers! <3333

[identity profile] takhallus.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I think it's chapter 3, don't even remember myself!

I was thinking how it would seem intimate but also be slightly weird because Mohinder would be looking at it from both a professional point of view, wanting to make sure his designs looked good, and a personal point of view where he really finds Gabriel attractive. And obviously Gabriel's never been dressed up or touched like that before so it would be strange for him, especially once he realises that there's going to be a photographer there!

My parents are both photographers so I've seen very attractive people get very uncomfortable under the camera lens, and I'm obssessed with the idea of being photogenic. Some gorgeous people are highly unphotogenic and vice versa.

Really glad you like the AU, I was supposed to be posting more last week but this chapter is proving difficult.