heart

[takhallus]

Title : Heart
Word Count : 105
Rating : G
Notes : This is a 'deleted scene' if you like from the Christmas Wishlist fic that I'm writing for perdiccas 

Mohinder paused as they approached the car. The condensation on the passenger window had dried, leaving just the traces of what had been drawn on the wetness a few hours ago. It was a heart, and inside the letters M and Z. The Z looked more like a backwards S, but what else could it be?

 

Mohinder sat in the driver’s seat and looked at the window from the inside while Zane rubbed his hands against the cold. From this angle, from where Zane would have been able to scrawl on the window from inside the car,  it looked like the letters S and M.

Comments

[brandinsbabe.livejournal.com]

aww this filled me with so much glee!! :D fluffy roadtrip fic is love.

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

I've not really written roadtrip before but this was fun!

[perdiccas.livejournal.com]

Dun dun dun daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Does Mohinder figure it out???

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

Well he does eventually right?! Silly old Sylar giving himself away!

[levitatethis.livejournal.com]

Oh this one is awesome. I love how much you say in only two paragraphs. There's both a sweetness to it and something more sinister. You totally hit these different emotional notes :-)

[takhallus.livejournal.com]

Thanks for saying that, so sweet! And sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment x